Brother_Kane

Spiritual I

Spiritual I

Through pain we learn, through life we live, taking each day as a precious gift... some days we smile some days we cry... is this the burden for this spiritual I

 

 

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  • Crystal Hope

    beautifully done.

    • Brother_Kane

      Thank you appreciate the feed back as Iā€™m quite new to this

    • serenity-poetry

      This is beautiful. Really highlights the ups and downs we experience through life in such a sweet simple way.

      • Brother_Kane

        Thank you serenity means a lot short and sweet unlike my others šŸ˜‚

      • Reyas

        Brilliantly written and perfectly worded, short and simple but lacks a huge punch. It was a really fun read that came with a good bit of truth, keep the good work flowing.



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