Deep Within

The hurt is too deep, too far down to reach, help is what I need for what is underneath 

It’s mine too keep, I just wish it would retreat 

The hurt is so deep , help me I’m stuck underneath 

E Simpson 2018 


  • Brother_Kane

    Very bare and bravo real heart on your sleeve style poem really well written hope it’s only a poem and your actually happy tho

  • Crystal Hope

    very moving. fine job!

  • Fay Slimm.

    A cry for help written with style and courage to face the hurt inside. An engaging read Elaine and look forward to reading more of your work.

  • Candlewitch

    hello Elaine,

    a write full of heart and soul. please keep writing, it is good therapy! wishing you all the best!

    *hugs, Cat

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