The hurt is too deep, too far down to reach, help is what I need for what is underneath
It’s mine too keep, I just wish it would retreat
The hurt is so deep , help me I’m stuck underneath
E Simpson 2018
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Author:
Elaine (
Offline) - Published: August 7th, 2018 17:45
- Comment from author about the poem: My journey within
- Category: Sad
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Very bare and bravo real heart on your sleeve style poem really well written hope it’s only a poem and your actually happy tho
very moving. fine job!
A cry for help written with style and courage to face the hurt inside. An engaging read Elaine and look forward to reading more of your work.
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