Candlewitch

and so they meet...

 

and so they meet...

 

 

her tread is light

on the stones of the path

her frame so slight

 

across the reflecting ponds

she dashes

past the water fronds

 

tiny feet in satin toe-shoes

one foot in front of the other

under a moon of hazy blues

 

and how it does hover

as she runs her course

to the arms of her phantom lover

 

who in yearning waits beyond the veil

for his love to take his hand

and kiss his face so pale

 

willing give up her life

meeting in the great shadow

to grasp the ceremonial knife

Comments9

  • Heartwriter

    Once again a master piece of a write. Well done!

    • Candlewitch

      thank you dear Heart!

      *hugs, Cat

    • Laura

      My dear Cat,

      A beautiful poem oozing with love!
      I was especially drawn to the words...

      “across the reflecting ponds
      she dashed
      past the water fronds”

      The vision your poem evokes is almost unbearable (in the most loving sense)!

      Loved it!

      Hugs 🤗 🤗
      ~Laura~

      • Candlewitch

        dear Laura,

        there is always something special within your comments! you make me feel good about my poems and self!!! :) thank you so very much!

        *hugs, Cat

      • dusk arising

        There is darkness here. Your lovely lady is blind to all but her love which has drawn her into this night.
        Will the power of her love turn his will?
        Enthralling power in this writing.

        • Candlewitch

          dear dusk,

          you have scraped away at the surface and found the under current! I love reading your observations! ;)

          *hugs, Cat

        • Michael Edwards

          More to this than meets the eye - an enigmatic write dear Cat

          • Candlewitch

            thank you Michael, you have a keen eye!

            *hugs, Cat

          • Crystal Hope

            your description was so well done!

            • Candlewitch

              thank you! it is very nice to meet you Crystal Hope!!!

              *hugs, Cat

            • Claudelle DeLuna

              Love it!
              P.S.
              It was a mysterious love story, so cool.
              ;)

              • Candlewitch

                thank you dear Claudelle,
                I'm so glad you enjoyed it!

                *hugs, Cat

              • Goldfinch60

                A truly loving write - but?

                • Candlewitch

                  thank you dear Goldfinch!

                  giving up an old life for a new, does that clear it up? thanks for reading and responding!

                  *hugs, Cat

                • Merissa

                  The description here is magnificent. I love the tinge of darkness that you apply to the love story. Shows that it's not all rainbows and butterflies. Great write.

                  • Candlewitch

                    thank you Merissa! I love your avatar...just beautiful!

                    *hugs, Cat

                  • Amherrera1190

                    Your descriptions are so beautiful.

                    • Candlewitch

                      thank you! you are very generous, and it is appreciated!

                      *hugs, Cat



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