Candlewitch

"I Am" by:eddy styx


"I Am"

A
FAT
round
lazy
brown.spider.sitting
sitting
SITTING
indolently on my web
patiently
weaving
A
sticky thread
of
Cotton~Candy~Words

 

by: eddy styx

Comments6

  • Heartwriter

    A spiders web waiting for it's prey. Cleverly written in how a spider decieves. Enjoyed!

    • Candlewitch

      thank you Heart, so glad you enjoyed it!

      ever, eddy

    • orchidee

      That spider might be cute! heehee.

      • Candlewitch

        thanks o. nice to see you 🙂

        ever, eddy

        • orchidee

          Must I always barge in with corny jokes? lol.

        • Laura🌻

          My dear Eddy,

          Your words have weaved a delicious poem!
          Once again you dark, mysterious Eddy are ready for your golden opportunity which has been given by your talented alter ego! Brilliantly yummy!

          ~Laura~

          • Candlewitch

            dear Laura,

            with my many eyes, I see you as delightful! thanks for the comment! 😉

            ever, eddy

          • Fay Slimm.

            A spider in waiting has sticky plans for unwary visitors and with a sting in the telling your eddy poems will always net my interest - - great job again Cat.

            • Candlewitch

              dear Fay,

              thanks for reading!

              ever, eddy
              *hugs, Cat

            • Goldfinch60

              They are just waiting eddy, their webs can remain unseen until they trap you. Good write.

              • Candlewitch

                lol! thanks , my friend!

                ever, eddy

              • Amherrera1190

                Yours are some of my most fav poems ive come accross.

                • Candlewitch

                  dear Lady,

                  I am deeply honored....thank you!

                  ever, eddy



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