My life

When did you stop loving me?

Did you ever start?

I thought that we were best of friends. 

i thought I had your heart.


I changed my life and all I had,

To be there by your side,

To love and laugh, to eat and sleep,

To sit and watch the tide.


Now I don't have a hand to hold,

Except one very small,

I have a job, a house and kids,

But I don't "have it all."


i dont have a partner,

I dont have a friend, 

I don't have the man I love,

Goodbye, goodnight, the end. 



  • serenity-poetry

    This is very powerful, represents the truth about heartache. Good writing.

    • caz84

      Thank you

    • Claudelle DeLuna

      Great Introspective writing!
      I like that!

      • caz84

        Thank you very much, I don't write often, these words literally fell out of me....

      • Crystal Hope

        Your first stanza broke my heart. Then as I read on,it broke more and more. Such an emotional and beautiful read.

      • JasmineUK


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