Claudelle DeLuna

Hummingbird

~~The hummingbird flies~

quickly to the sweet nectar~

A Grandmother smiles!

**Claudelle**

Comments8

  • Crystal Hope

    Awe. So very lovely! 🐦🐤

    • Claudelle DeLuna

      Thank you for your nice comment! Crystal Hope
      Blessings!
      :)

    • Goldfinch60

      Super write, your Grandmother will always be smiling on you.

      • Claudelle DeLuna

        Thank you for your lovely comment! Gold
        Blessings!
        :)

      • Michael Edwards

        Brilliant and in 575 format - love this verse Claudelle

        • Claudelle DeLuna

          Thank you so much for encouraging me and your lovely comment! Mr. Edwards
          Blessings!
          :)

          • Michael Edwards

            My pleasure and I value your on-line friendship so do please call me Michael .

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          • Resa71

            The Hummingbird is quite significant to me as well. Each time a loved one has passed, a Hummingbird appears within a few days.
            Why the Hummingbird?
            When I was a child, I was afraid of them.
            My mother told me that they are magical, gentle creatures.
            It was after her death that the Hummingbirds began to visit me
            Thank you for sharing this.
            Resa.

            • Claudelle DeLuna

              Thank you for stopping by and reading!
              In my culture's lore the hummingbird represents reincarnation.
              So after death a love one can take form of hummingbird to connect back with us.
              A fact about them is that they rotate their wings in the form of an 8 connecting this number with the infinity symbol, this also enables them to go backwards and to hover in one spot.
              Blessings!
              :)

            • Heartwriter

              A hummingbird is a fav for me. It's hard to keep the bees from the feeders though. I enjoyed this.

              • Claudelle DeLuna

                Thank you for your nice comment! Heart
                Blessings!
                :)

              • Joe Dawson

                So many miss their Grandmother. I miss mine, always have, always will. Touching in a sweet way. Joe

                • Claudelle DeLuna

                  Thank you for your nice comment and sharing your feelings too!
                  I appreciate that.
                  :)

                • Laura

                  Claudelle,

                  Beautiful!
                  “A Grandmother smiles!”
                  La crème de la crème!


                  ~Laura~


                  • Claudelle DeLuna

                    Thank you for your lovely comment! Laura
                    Blessings!
                    :)

                  • Jon Nakapalau

                    Simple yet profound - well done!



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