Flavor

Netashi

  • You, so stubborn and are still yearning for me

Me, stuffed to the brim like a bear drowning in expectations and dreams

  • You, waiting for me to execute something grand

Me, staring as I force my own limits and hand

  • You, caring and loving trying your best to help

Me, not trying for nobody hears my deafened yelps

  • You, accompanied with your soul and sympathy

Me, with a counterfeit smile while spoiled and filthy

  • You, pondering on my thoughts and behavior

Me, wanting to taste the flavor of a failure

  • Author: Ernie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: August 29th, 2018 11:59
  • Comment from author about the poem: Haven't wrote any negative themes in a while wasn't sad or anything just bored so as always feedback is welcomed
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 11
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  • Netashi

    Any suggestions on the next topic???

  • Fay Slimm.

    The swing between both genders in this clear reminder shows how one-sided the giving can be in a failing relationship - - sad but true this outlines much of the troubled exchanges betwixt the negative and the positive nature of opposite sexes. Thoughtfully compoased Theta.

    • Netashi

      Thx Fay



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