- You, so stubborn and are still yearning for me
Me, stuffed to the brim like a bear drowning in expectations and dreams
- You, waiting for me to execute something grand
Me, staring as I force my own limits and hand
- You, caring and loving trying your best to help
Me, not trying for nobody hears my deafened yelps
- You, accompanied with your soul and sympathy
Me, with a counterfeit smile while spoiled and filthy
- You, pondering on my thoughts and behavior
Me, wanting to taste the flavor of a failure
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Author:
Ernie (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: August 29th, 2018 11:59
- Comment from author about the poem: Haven't wrote any negative themes in a while wasn't sad or anything just bored so as always feedback is welcomed
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The swing between both genders in this clear reminder shows how one-sided the giving can be in a failing relationship - - sad but true this outlines much of the troubled exchanges betwixt the negative and the positive nature of opposite sexes. Thoughtfully compoased Theta.
Thx Fay
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