Raging within the essence of life
Tsunami caught, typhoon strife
Peace be still
Sipping from the bitter cup of its lover’s fill
Wants, Needs, Hurt I bleed
Standing tall
Mirror Mirror on the wall
Scorpion words, erected blocks falls
Blind ripples troubled water calls
Scorned by truth
Mentality coveted, surrendered, and now reduced
Emotional veil has been lifted
Ocean currents angrily has been shifted
Tidal waves of souls washed up, and now has drifted
Waterfalls given, streams of dreams sailing away
No shoreline to rescue, as waves fiercely slay
Underwater, I slowly go
Aquarian nature propels the flow
Where the horizon greets, only God will ever know
Breaths of life above sinking depth
Troubled waters give unto the heart, mind, and soul its divinity rest
Dream Weaver
Staff dipped in troubled waters, calamity’s reliever
Motionless to the hearts of passionate achievers
Emotional believers
Universal conceives
Troubled Waters
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hello,
great imagery that brings things into focus and magnifies emotions! nice to meet you!
*hugs, Cat
Likewise, and thank you Candlewitch for commenting on my poem. However, I am a tad curious in regard to the meaning behind your user name; it could mean absolutely nothing, just as is. I only inquired because, it’s a unique name within itself, and its ironic we share the same air sign. One thing I could add, our minds are always aligned with the stars, the constellations, and the universe does whisper to us, it has, and it will always be our greatest inner muse. Have a great day as well.
The Gifted One
hello!
I am wiccan and I believe that thoughts have energy. I light candles and *wish good (or white) thoughts (and healing thoughts to others) my "dark energy or thoughts" I write down as dark poems under the name of: eddy styx. that way I don't harm anyone and at the same time I get the darkness out of me for a while. I like what you wrote in your comment to me...you have a lovely soul and it shows
*hugs, Cat
A fantastic piece. Quite moving!
Thank you Crystal for taking the time to read and then comment. Have a great evening as well.
The Gifted One
strong imagery. This is a good poem.
Thank you Fuche-bu for taking the time to read and then comment on my poem, it's much appreciated. Enjoy the rest of your day.
The Gifted One
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