I turned around
just in time to see
our happiness floating away.
It was not shocking,
or sad -
just an ending.
Like a balloon
that you let go of,
looking at the color...
Even as it drifts into the sky,
taken away up into vastness -
fingers still gripping an invisible string.
-
Author:
Jon Nakapalau (
Offline) - Published: September 10th, 2018 15:43
- Comment from author about the poem: I wanted to present a different take on loss
- Category: Sad
- Views: 20
Offline)
Comments2
an incredible write
Thanks Crystal!
Wonderful depiction of the seniment Jon love the last line very powerful
Thank you Andrew!
To be able to comment and rate this poem, you must be registered. Register here or if you are already registered, login here.