Jubilant for me
(and you!) to light a single
silk thread of that which
enclosed you, fuse fired, to set
you loose so we might fly free.
-Gary Edward Geraci
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Gary Edward Geraci (
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A fine Tanka Gary. Oh lol, I snigger. Many put 'loose' when it should be 'lose', e.g. when did you loose your hat?'
Also a huge sigh by a shop says 'Stationary for sale!' heehee.
That’s a nagging fear of mine: to write “lose” instead of “loose”, “chose” instead of “choose”, “colendar” instead of “calendar” - spell check isn’t going to save the day hear (get it? “hear” instead of “here”)
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