My worldview befits
the closed-in deadness of a
cocoon; safe and self-
satisfied; bereft of the
keys to blinding mysteries.
-Gary Edward Geraci
- Author: Gary Edward Geraci ( Offline)
- Published: September 21st, 2018 09:15
- Comment from author about the poem: The “Cocoon” Tankas: My original stream of thought in it’s entirety: ‘Your worldview befits the closed-ended-ness of a cocoon safe and self-satisfied but bereft of the keys to the great mysteries. Oh it pains me to see you languish here mate! How jubilant for me (and you) to light a single silk thread of that which encloses you so as to set you free so that we, staying the course, could run together forever.” So, in the final act, I created two, 5-7-5-7-7 Tankas, releasing the sequel “Silk Cocoons” first and then the prequel “This Binding Cocoon” second. Such is poetic license when one goes about ‘wordsmithing’!
- Category: Spiritual
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Comments1
New word there? Befret? In your comment. Ooh! Sounds like a word of ye olden days. A fine write Gary.
Thanks Orchidee for the read and for catching the spelling error in my comment section. Although I believe I might have made up at least one new word in a previous poem (check my poem “Green Apples”) clearly it was not my intention here.
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