She had an innocence about her
that was so pure
but on that fateful night
things changed for her
for sure
She went from
sane
to completely
deranged
and everything
disengaged
on that day
And she tried to get back
to the way she was before
but
she was too hellbent on evening the score
and there was nothing else
she cared about anymore
she had come to a locked door
Not knowing if she was
trapped in
or out
because everything in her life was easy to doubt
then when her Locked Up Emotions
finally thrusted out
She knew she was lost
and how that’d came about
all because of one Hateful night
where she gained so much darkness
and lost so much light
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Author:
Living Dead Girl (
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Comments1
This little tour de force says so much without giving us the facts... what happened we don't know, but it's so effective to leave the story out and just describe the emotional story, the flow of feelings, the inner drama. I feel like I want to know what happened.... but then I realize, I know. I know the important part. The part you are trying to tell...
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