Sensing Me

sylviasearcher



As the cold brutal winds of man

Finally break me

My descent is without sound

As philosophers gather to ponder

The existence of a fallen tree

 

As I lie amidst the life at forest floor

The sky embraces 

My elevation defies the laws of man

As scientists consider

The reincarnation of my thousand faces

 

Mountains murmour 

Beneath oscillating oceans

Scattering sandbeds

Sensing

Me

 

As I dance and fly and run with Noone

But my many selves

My being becomes a riddle

As I learn 

And into my soul defiantly delve

 

Mountains murmour

Beneath oscillating oceans

Scattering sandbeds

Sensing

Me

 

Boulders bellow

Wild waves awaken

Swirling sandbeds

Reaching

Me

 

Evermore

They whisper

Evermore 

They sing

Evermore

A homecoming

Myself 

To life

We bring

 

 

 

  • Author: sylviasearcher (Offline Offline)
  • Published: September 23rd, 2018 08:11
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  • User favorite of this poem: LaurašŸŒ».
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Comments3

  • Richard--Castle Donington

    Very nice

  • LaurašŸŒ»

    sylviasearcher,

    A compelling read. Your write reminds me of Maya Angelouā€™s ā€œI Know Why The Caged Bird Singsā€. A powerful literary piece!

    Your poemā€™s meaning is heightened with the repeating stanza. It works very well as does Judy Garlandā€™s
    šŸŽ¶Over The Rainbow šŸŽ¶

    A super write!

    ~Laura~

    • sylviasearcher

      Thanks Laura, I adore Maya Angelou, so to echo the sentiments of one of her great pieces is a great compliment. I have not read I know why the caged bird sings for a while.

      Her writing is so powerful and defiant.

      Thanks again

      Sylvia

      • LaurašŸŒ»

        Yes, sheā€™s one of the greatest!

      • Neville

        I sense thee near & breathe deep pon those pulse points you try so hard to hide behind.... beautiful poem and true.. N

        • sylviasearcher

          Thanks N.
          It was about being at home with nature.
          I didn't think I hid my pulse points?

          • Neville

            I sensed that... maybe there's summat wrong with me senses... now I'm sounding like orchi swoon....

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