my minds volume is rising until my ears bleed
the thoughts of my happiness fading scares me my anxiety is in the lead
just please let me out do i have to get on my knees and plead?
who am i begging for mercy from? how is it everyone doesn’t get into the gates in the sky, just some
god doesn’t sin right? didn’t he sin when he impregnated mary without making her married?
was his hair really long? that cross was too much for him to carry
if a god ive never seen be real, what about tinker bell the fairy?
i don’t want to just be comfortable from death
i want answers on where my soul is really going, where will i be after i take my last breath?
where is the importance in my life?
does all my happiness really depend on if i become a mans wife?
i have no clue and neither do you
so let’s continue to make excuses for things that happen out of the blue
dont demand answers
let the wealthy keep their dirty powers .
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Author:
LH (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 24th, 2018 14:42
- Category: Religion
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"i don’t want to just be comfortable from death
i want answers on where my soul is really going, where will i be after i take my last breath?"
You've asked in poetic form what most of us choose to know; however, it's impossible to have complete knowledge of the hereafter in this present realm.
I like your inquisitiveness and your poem gave us all a little food for thought.
Thanks for posting!
I disagree. I think the line “I have no clue and neither do you” is a much truer statement if ever one was. Some of us “choose to know”, yes, but that choice does not grant universal truth, only peace of mind for that individual. Also, we do not know what we do not know, so any statement of impossibility is really just giving up as the end to the poem suggests.
Great poem!
thank you i’m glad it had a little impact on you!(:
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