like love that can no longer absorb
into living touch that can feel the
little drops like a heart dried
and brittle that has now
curled up and is now
no longer able to
feel anything
new.
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Author:
Jon Nakapalau (
Offline) - Published: September 24th, 2018 15:23
- Comment from author about the poem: Just a thought.
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
Yes, your poem is indeed sad, but loaded with food for thought. Nicely written. 🙂
Keep posting!
Thank you!
Sad image, but when the leaf falls to the floor and becomes part of the earth which nourishes the tree. It will become endless.
Very true - thank you for your comment.
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