The places we’ve been.
Laughs we’ve had.
Tears we’ve shed.
I’m happy with you.
But you saw something else.
A brighter side of me.
And then you left.
For a person unlike me.
A joy I had.
I’ll never laugh again.
To see you one last time.
Happy was I with you.
Good-bye my love.
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Author:
Alfred Lord Tennyson (Pseudonym) (
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Your poem is full of the sorrows of life and the loss of someone loved.
Readers feel the emotion you've penned within the lines.
Nicely written. 🙂
Derivative title, isn't it? Paul McCartney's new album has a track called Happy With You on it.
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qlC_90TKRSg
Wrote the poem on 04/26/2017, was not my intention to correlate the title to another piece of writing. Just saw this poem amongst my others and decided to post it.
Haha it happens. I wrote something called Who Cares before it appeared on his new album so yea.
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