One Tear Removed
My heart has stopped!
There is no sound
within these hollow walls.
No pumping as it were.
Oh God, no beat!
No drum that sounds the rhythm of the day.
No melody that sings your serenade.
Enter the night!
Cooling desert flowers with her breeze.
She spits; then laughs,
as star shed tears
to wash your footprints from a routine path.
I search in vain
to find a reverie; a fleeting song,
where you once lived
dancing in the shadow of the sun.
Yet, what remains
is just a silhouette within my mind,
which quickly turns to stone
without remorse,
then walks away in haste;
a living thing,
one tear removed
from a desperate scream.
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Author:
Tamara Beryl Latham (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: September 28th, 2018 08:54
- Category: Love
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Comments7
I really like your style of poetry! So descriptive and I just love how you ended this!
Thanks, Christina S. I'm happy for your input and that you liked the poem. 🙂
Your gift for words is amazing Tamara - - another gem to your poetic crown and thank you for sharing it.
Oh, thank you, Fay. I appreciate you stopping by and commenting. 🙂
Agree, what a wonderful talent you have
Thanks, sylviasearcher. You are too kind. 🙂
A fine write Tamara.
Thank you, orchidee. I appreciate your thoughtfulness. 🙂
Thank you, Simon. 🙂
Wow. The last 2 verses really pack a punch for me.
Thank you Debsspot. I'm elated you enjoyed those verses. Thanks for your input. 🙂
a smashing poem indeed, from one end to the very other.. and much enjoyed.... N
Thanks, Neville. I appreciate your feedback. 🙂
my pleasure Tamara.. twas thoroughly enjoyed..
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