Virgin gown, pulsating heart. 

Prestine veil, pulverising apprehension. 

Fluorescent eye, intrusive demeanour. 

Fair woman.



O, adamantine woman, 

O, mother, 

O, wife, 

A daughter, 

A bride, 

Say I do?


Defiled gown, frigid heart. 

Judicious veil, manic hysteria.

Penetrating eye, hasty psychopathy.

Delusional woman.



O, demented woman!

Let me

                          watch you


O, widow, 


An orphan, 


An inamorata, 


My cherished! 



Say I do.




  • Author: J. A. S Gandu-Chaudhri (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 2nd, 2018 03:59
  • Comment from author about the poem: Please note: the first stanza’s structure may be corrupted due to the device on which I uploaded this poem.
  • Category: Love
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  • Netashi

    Welcome to mps enjoy your stay here.
    Very nice write

  • MissileOfUncertainty

    I love this! It’s so... in your face. Like the parallelism is brilliant. Great job.

    • jessicagchaudhri

      Thank you, to know that people find one’s poetry so enjoyable is one of the best comforts experienceable.

    • Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

      Dramatic verse and an enjoyable read. Your words are penetrating.

      Thanks for sharing! 🙂

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