Netashi

Fragments of sorrow

Three stories

Theta was here, he was the

spectator

 

Volume I

  • I offered my heart, and you graced me with regret

You tore my heart i will never forget

 

  • You led me into a pool and drowned me in deceit

 

We would be together forever and sweep me off my feet

 

  • But it was lie from the very start

 

To fill your damn hole and tear my heart

Volume II

 

  • Everything is now slow and has no taste

 

Why did you leave me with such haste

 

  • You had dreams and so did I

 

So why did you have to go and fucking die

 

  • We were a duo, a pair, the dream team

 

And now my happiness is fading at the seems

 

  • It appears our goals and dreams will end

 

I have witnessed the death of a friend

 

Volume III

 

  • Was held down by anxiety and now by them

 

I did not know I was in the presence of fucking scum

 

  • Pushed me from behind without a second thought

 

I was crying scared shitless and yet you still fought

 

  • I couldn’t believed you enjoyed it you felt dignity

 

when all I felt was betrayal and vulnerability

 

  • You had the laugh of a jackal and smile of an imp

 

I see why choose me the socially awkward wimp

 

  • But your in jail now and that was our last date

 

For a homeless man was my witness as i got raped

 

  • Author: Ernie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 2nd, 2018 10:06
  • Comment from author about the poem: Hope you don't mind the extremely darker tone a friend requested it so yeah.....as always feedback is welcome. Have a wonderful day or evening. -Theta PS: If you have a suggestion don't be shy
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Comments3

  • MissileOfUncertainty

    You’re right, this is really dark. It also feels raw and authentic. So thanks for sharing.

    • Netashi

      Thank you for the kind words. Although I've never felt any of these feelings (thankfully and also because im also a fellow that keeps to himself) i tried my best to capture what I think is true heartbreak or just straight terrifyingly sad. So saying it seems raw and authentic really is a great compliment so again thank you

    • Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

      Yes, it is so very sad and heavy on the reader's heart, but you got the point across nicely.

      Although dark, a great read. Don't stop writing! 🙂

      • Netashi

        Thank you for the kind words Tamara

      • chaaz

        wow....this is just BEAUTIFUL! i loved it soo much..thanks for sharing



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