Three stories
Theta was here, he was the
spectator
Volume I
- I offered my heart, and you graced me with regret
You tore my heart i will never forget
- You led me into a pool and drowned me in deceit
We would be together forever and sweep me off my feet
- But it was lie from the very start
To fill your damn hole and tear my heart
Volume II
- Everything is now slow and has no taste
Why did you leave me with such haste
- You had dreams and so did I
So why did you have to go and fucking die
- We were a duo, a pair, the dream team
And now my happiness is fading at the seems
- It appears our goals and dreams will end
I have witnessed the death of a friend
Volume III
- Was held down by anxiety and now by them
I did not know I was in the presence of fucking scum
- Pushed me from behind without a second thought
I was crying scared shitless and yet you still fought
- I couldn’t believed you enjoyed it you felt dignity
when all I felt was betrayal and vulnerability
- You had the laugh of a jackal and smile of an imp
I see why choose me the socially awkward wimp
- But your in jail now and that was our last date
For a homeless man was my witness as i got raped
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Author:
Ernie (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: October 2nd, 2018 10:06
- Comment from author about the poem: Hope you don't mind the extremely darker tone a friend requested it so yeah.....as always feedback is welcome. Have a wonderful day or evening. -Theta PS: If you have a suggestion don't be shy
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Comments3
You’re right, this is really dark. It also feels raw and authentic. So thanks for sharing.
Thank you for the kind words. Although I've never felt any of these feelings (thankfully and also because im also a fellow that keeps to himself) i tried my best to capture what I think is true heartbreak or just straight terrifyingly sad. So saying it seems raw and authentic really is a great compliment so again thank you
Yes, it is so very sad and heavy on the reader's heart, but you got the point across nicely.
Although dark, a great read. Don't stop writing! 🙂
Thank you for the kind words Tamara
wow....this is just BEAUTIFUL! i loved it soo much..thanks for sharing
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