the talking of it is over

Jon Nakapalau

and in the echo of silence

more questions are answered
across a still lake

of future years
that no pebble of forgiveness

will break
and ripple out

in the concentric ring
that is lost

in granite horizontal trap.

  • Author: Jon Nakapalau (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 4th, 2018 13:20
  • Comment from author about the poem: Another way of looking at a breakup.
  • Category: Forgiveness
  • Views: 22


  • Quemis

    This is like a perfect circle drawn in the sand.

    Simple, visual, powerful.

    I like it.

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