Impermanence (II)

ImpGratAdapt

Old news as it's read

this sentence is not endless

and neither are we

  • Author: ImpGratAdapt (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 9th, 2018 09:38
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • sylviasearcher

    Perfect

    • ImpGratAdapt

      Really? lol
      It's not meant to be a 'downer', but meant to show how every little thing changes/ 'ends' (including how we are at the time we read the sentance).
      I'm a newbie, so any advice is welcomed!

    • sylviasearcher

      Oh no I genuinely liked it. Short and succinct but so much within 17 words.

      A haiku too!

      • ImpGratAdapt

        Thank you.
        I know there's some disagreement with what's Haiku or Senryu etc so I've not labelled it as anything

        • sylviasearcher

          Oh I am always in trouble with the poetry police!



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