tepo

Clear

Bag that matches her heels

Low cut top that reveals

Just enough to add class to her style

Make up lightly applied

In the mirror she sighed

As she hadn't been out in a while

Had it all in her hand

Queen of fairytale land

When Prince charming rode in for the kill

Swept straight off both her feet

Lands amongst the elite

Seeking even a momentary thrill

Oasis free of charge

Or a costly mirage

Shiny trinkets and baubles stone cold

In a flash he was gone

From the Ritz to the pawn

Looked upon as the crease in the fold

One message heaven sent

From the one who was meant

To share every emotion and tear

If it isn't to.late

Readjust twists of fate

When the heart See's it all becomes clear

 

 

Comments7

  • Christina8

    Wow this is really heartfelt. A stunning piece! Straight to the favorites!

    • tepo

      Good to see you Christina
      Thanks very much
      Appreciated as always
      Ta

      • Christina8

        Good to see you as well!
        Nice to have you back!

      • Goldfinch60

        Good to see you again tepo with a fine write, the heart can see through the darkness.

        • tepo

          Thanks Goldfinch
          Lovely welcome
          Much appreciated

        • Michael Edwards

          A welcome return with a fine work.

          • tepo

            Thank you Michael

          • Fay Slimm

            Finely crafted and captures the depth of love's caring appeal - great read tepo and welcome back.

            • tepo

              Thank you Fay
              Really appreciate your comment
              Ta

            • Unsub

              tepo,

              at this rate you may actually be a poet! LOL!

              This is f#@king awesome my friend,

              Unsub.

              • tepo

                Cheers man
                Very kind thing to say
                Appreciate it

              • Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

                Nicely done.

                The first few lines really captured the reader's attention. I enjoyed this write.

                • tepo

                  Thank you Tamara
                  Extremely grateful for the kind words
                  Ta

                • Santita

                  This is a cleverly woven tale of there being so much more to life than materialistic things. Love the splash of hope at the end; if we change our greedy ways, we might find the right path.
                  Very clever piece indeed.
                  Happy to read your words again :)

                  • tepo

                    thank you santita
                    Very much appreciated
                    Ta for everything



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