Understanding is essential,
as it's part of every day,
for in a future moment,
nothing will be the same.
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Author:
ImpGratAdapt (Pseudonym) (
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- Comment from author about the poem: Can it be improved? Should there be more added, or is it ok to leave the reader to make their own list of changes?
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Comments1
No changes necessary. Short and sweet, 'less is more'.
Powerful and punchy and gives your reader plenty of opportunity to romance your words.
I prefer the short myself. Thanks for the feedback!
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