Autumn's Winds

Jamie

Falling leaves gossip

and tattle on Autumn's winds

the heart mourns lost love

  • Author: Jamie (Offline Offline)
  • Published: October 26th, 2018 11:16
  • Comment from author about the poem: Loss
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • A.H. Browning

    nice

    • Jamie

      Thanks

    • Goldfinch60

      Good Senryu.

      • Jamie

        Thanks, GF, for both the comment and the lesson. I was thinking haiku, but after researching the difference between the two, I think you're right, it seems to be senryu.

        • Goldfinch60

          My pleasure, it is almost half and half but the final line convinced me that it is a Senryu.

        • Michael Edwards

          Nice one.

          • Jamie

            Thanks Maestro!



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