When silence becomes loud
And
Clarity becomes doubt
Then
With people, feel alone
But
You don’t want them to go
Because
The silence is too loud
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Author:
Miss M S Smith (Pseudonym) (
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A true state of loneliness is felt from the read of these poignant words Maxine - - silence though at times golden can be very loud to those feeling lonely. An engaging read.
Thank you so much Fay, I’m learning how to enjoy the silence and be at peace with it.
A fine write Maxine. Yet true, as in really silent places it can seem 'loud' and hurt our ears.
I wrote a silent poem. No words in it, mind you. I wondered why no one read it. Hmm, strange that! heehee.
Haha that’s brilliant, thank you so much Orchidee, glad you liked.
Or that bit of 'music' - 4 mins 33 seconds of silence?!
Deep read or a play with words - whatever it's a darn good read Maxine
Aw thank you Michael, appreciate your lovely words.
Maxine,
To quote a brilliant poet,
“I understand the silent moments,
the inner freedom to roam”
I’m glad you’re learning to ‘enjoy the silence and be at peace with it’!
Hugs 🤗
~Laura~
Thank you so much hunny, always lovely to read your kind feedback, makes such a difference having someone appreciate your writing.
So very true, silence can be so loud but so important to our continued well-being.
Thank you for reading Gold,
Wonderful Maxine - and lonely.........
Thank you hunny, was having a down day, as we all do, I decided to write about it this time.
I favor being alone but at times i do get tired of it, this poem does help describe what happens when people do get more then tired of being alone. Great write keep it up.
-theta
Thank you for stopping by, and for your lovely words hun.
Very deep and very good. Silence can be deafening at times x
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