Devour, Devine, body’s intertwine
Amour, adore, surrendering rhythm
Night so bright overwhelmed with sweet delight
Cherish each beat with every sound in sight
Engaged, musical souls drift in the night
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Author:
Miss M S Smith (Pseudonym) (
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Fortunately SWEET MAXINE I am a Star Trek Buff so I can read KLINGON ! Love the rhythm in your Poem ~ Aqui es mi respuesta ~ OK
YES ~ Devour Devine ~ Bodies intertwine
AMOR ~ night so bright ~ I love every line
Cherish each beat ~ Nos Amor es complet
Musical Sounds por Nos Balarados piedes
Delightful ACROSTIC ~ Si por favor ! Tu Hermano y Amigo ~ BRIAN. I adore nuestra silhouetta !
Thanks for your lovely comment Brian. Glad you enjoyed it.
Good loving write Maxine.
Thank you Gold.
Ahh this has all appeared in Wingdings script to me, I think they call it! Maybe something to do with the uploading?
Oh no, il try edit the format.
Maxine,
Great acrostic! It made me feel like getting up and dance! One small problem...my dancing partner 💃🏻🕺🏼 is not here!
*Brilliant
*Alluring
*Lively
*Luxurious
*Opportune
*BALLO...Italian for dance
Hugs 🤗
~Laura~
Love your acrostic feedback hunny ☺️☺️
Aw then you must dance with your girls 💃 💃
Thanks for your lovely comment ☺️
Hello Maxine,
Thank you for this fabulous poem on the beauty of Dance.
Keep writing
FineB
Thank you so much, having a bit of a writers block recently and haven’t published much, so it is definitely a pleasure to come back to a lovely comment.
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