Maxine Smith

-x- Dance -x- Acrostic-x-

Devour, Devine, body’s intertwine 

Amour, adore, surrendering rhythm 

Night so bright overwhelmed with sweet delight 

Cherish each beat with every sound in sight  

Engaged, musical souls drift in the night 

Comments5

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Fortunately SWEET MAXINE I am a Star Trek Buff so I can read KLINGON ! Love the rhythm in your Poem ~ Aqui es mi respuesta ~ OK

    YES ~ Devour Devine ~ Bodies intertwine
    AMOR ~ night so bright ~ I love every line
    Cherish each beat ~ Nos Amor es complet
    Musical Sounds por Nos Balarados piedes

    Delightful ACROSTIC ~ Si por favor ! Tu Hermano y Amigo ~ BRIAN. I adore nuestra silhouetta !

    • Maxine Smith

      Thanks for your lovely comment Brian. Glad you enjoyed it.

    • Goldfinch60

      Good loving write Maxine.

    • orchidee

      Ahh this has all appeared in Wingdings script to me, I think they call it! Maybe something to do with the uploading?

      • Maxine Smith

        Oh no, il try edit the format.

      • Laura

        Maxine,

        Great acrostic! It made me feel like getting up and dance! One small problem...my dancing partner ๐Ÿ’ƒ๐Ÿป๐Ÿ•บ๐Ÿผ is not here!

        *Brilliant
        *Alluring
        *Lively
        *Luxurious
        *Opportune

        *BALLO...Italian for dance

        Hugs ๐Ÿค—
        ~Laura~

        • Maxine Smith

          Love your acrostic feedback hunny โ˜บ๏ธโ˜บ๏ธ
          Aw then you must dance with your girls ๐Ÿ’ƒ ๐Ÿ’ƒ
          Thanks for your lovely comment โ˜บ๏ธ

        • FineB

          Hello Maxine,

          Thank you for this fabulous poem on the beauty of Dance.

          Keep writing
          FineB

          • Maxine Smith

            Thank you so much, having a bit of a writers block recently and havenโ€™t published much, so it is definitely a pleasure to come back to a lovely comment.



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