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Maxine Smith

Devour, Devine, body’s intertwine 

Amour, adore, surrendering rhythm 

Night so bright overwhelmed with sweet delight 

Cherish each beat with every sound in sight  

Engaged, musical souls drift in the night 

  • Author: Miss M S Smith (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: November 6th, 2018 13:17
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 108
  • User favorite of this poem: BRIAN & ANGELA.

Comments5

  • BRIAN & ANGELA

    Fortunately SWEET MAXINE I am a Star Trek Buff so I can read KLINGON ! Love the rhythm in your Poem ~ Aqui es mi respuesta ~ OK

    YES ~ Devour Devine ~ Bodies intertwine
    AMOR ~ night so bright ~ I love every line
    Cherish each beat ~ Nos Amor es complet
    Musical Sounds por Nos Balarados piedes

    Delightful ACROSTIC ~ Si por favor ! Tu Hermano y Amigo ~ BRIAN. I adore nuestra silhouetta !

    • Maxine Smith

      Thanks for your lovely comment Brian. Glad you enjoyed it.

    • Goldfinch60

      Good loving write Maxine.

    • orchidee

      Ahh this has all appeared in Wingdings script to me, I think they call it! Maybe something to do with the uploading?

      • Maxine Smith

        Oh no, il try edit the format.

      • Laura🌻

        Maxine,

        Great acrostic! It made me feel like getting up and dance! One small problem...my dancing partner 💃🏻🕺🏼 is not here!

        *Brilliant
        *Alluring
        *Lively
        *Luxurious
        *Opportune

        *BALLO...Italian for dance

        Hugs 🤗
        ~Laura~

        • Maxine Smith

          Love your acrostic feedback hunny ☺️☺️
          Aw then you must dance with your girls 💃 💃
          Thanks for your lovely comment ☺️

        • FineB

          Hello Maxine,

          Thank you for this fabulous poem on the beauty of Dance.

          Keep writing
          FineB

          • Maxine Smith

            Thank you so much, having a bit of a writers block recently and haven’t published much, so it is definitely a pleasure to come back to a lovely comment.



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