Santita

Sedona

In the land of red-rock buttes
Lives a magic, rippling energy
With diamond silks of knowing mountain air
Caressing open, willing souls 
Whispering Native American prayers

This vortex of divinity
Is my natural spirit-healer
Cleansing my haunts of deeply embedded pain
Amidst the glow that hits the rocks
In cosmic energy from another plane

The sandstone etched by the universe
Is painted here in rich, tonic-red
Casting a spell on the beating heart of eyes
This is the desert's prized ruby
Comforting a lifetime of internal cries

Comments13

  • orchidee

    A fine write Santita. KP's up to her self-publicising stunts again, I think. Whatever made me marry here on Halloween? I must have been spooked into it!

    • Santita

      haha you guys are a match made in heaven!
      Thanks, Orchi!

      • orchidee

        Oohh yes, I'm an attention-seeking, publicity-touting dark horse, with a barking (mad) '18+' dog called Fido! You'll hear him bark in some poem comments, if they have not marked them 18+ when they should be.

      • Goldfinch60

        Beautiful write Santita.

        • Santita

          Thank you, Goldie :)

        • BRIAN & ANGELA

          GRACIAS SANTITA ~ Por una Poema muy Espiritual ~ Santona una Sita de DIOS. Thanks for sharing ~ SANTONA is a very sacred place ~ beloved of the NATIVE AMERICANS ! Whenever I visit it is easy to PRAY because I feel the presence of GOD right there beside me ~ AMEN. My Poem today is asking people to PRAY for CALIFORNIA & especially PARADISE~which has lost everything. Por favor vistar mi POEMA y comentar ~ GRACIAS ~ Abrazos y Besos con Amor en El Spirito Sancto ~ Th Hermano BRIAN 🧡🧡🧡🧡

          • Santita

            Thanks for feeling the spirit in this piece, B. *abrazos*

          • Syd

            Beautiful poem as always Santita. I'm almost envious of the way you can write with such emotion and detail.

            Stay cool - Syd xo

            • Santita

              You're writing is awesome, Syd, equally emotive! Thanks for the continued support! Happy to read from you. Be well.

              • Syd

                Aw thanks so much Santita. I'm not around as much as I used to be. I feel I've took too much on and am becoming as slave to the system. The same thing I often write about. I'm a hypocrite I suppose but at least I'm aware.

                Take care - Syd

              • Laura

                My Dear Santi,

                This poem is incredible!
                You’re incredible!
                You’ve penned words on this page that are “casting a spell” on your readers! It warms my heart!
                Finding your “natural spirit-healer” to cleanse your “haunts of deeply embedded pain” in that “vortex of divinity” is simply celestial! I love the way you depict your “desert’s prized ruby”!

                An exceptional write! Thank you for sharing your innner beauty and the gift of your pen!
                AMAZING!

                Hugs 🤗
                ~Laura~

                • Santita

                  This was an overflow of warmth to read, Laura, I am happy that you felt this piece so. Thank you so much for the kind words and thoughtful reply! Much appreciated. *hugs*

                • Sugiura Asuna

                  Gorgeous!

                  • Santita

                    Thank you!

                  • Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

                    Santita, the words in your poem dance across the page trumpeting language and images that are delightfully refreshing for the reader.

                    You have a unique way with words and it's a delight to read each and every of your poems.

                    "The sandstone etched by the universe" is classic.

                    You are truly talented. :-)

                    • Santita

                      What a lovely comment you've left me to smile at, Tamara. Thank you so much for the kind words! I'm delighted you enjoyed this piece :)

                      • Tamara Beryl Latham - The Poet

                        Santita, I enjoy all your poems.

                      • dusk arising

                        It's like you've turned a page. Today we read a declaration of something which is a deep part of you, penned with confidence anew.

                        Such healing from radiant spiritual energy. I'm envious of this place for it's cleansing effect upon one's soul. I'm envious of you too for having found such a healing peace in the world.

                        Superb writing, it warms me and brings a smile of pleasure across my face.

                        I sense something good is happening for you.

                        • Santita

                          There are many beautiful places to visit in this world, that bring us joy and a sense of peace. For me, Sedona is an extra special place, it brings a cleansing, and renewal of energy. Thank you for your wonderful words. Miss you, my friend. Hope you are well.

                        • sylviasearcher

                          I am not sure what else is left to say.

                          I keep re-reading to take myself to magical place you have created with your art.

                          Your writing is spell binding 🌟

                          • Santita

                            Seeing your comments always makes me happy, because I know that you really allow yourself to feel the writing, I appreciate that immensely. Thank you.

                          • ron parrish aka wordman

                            sounds magical

                          • Joe Dawson

                            There is a magic in every place, but in yours more than most. Beautiful. Joe

                            • Santita

                              Thank you very much, Joe!

                            • Neville

                              One reads these words wide eyed and in wonder.. a spiritual write if ever there was.... Neville

                              • Santita

                                That was lovely to read, Neville. Thank you so much!

                                • Neville

                                  my very sincere pleasure..

                                • Tristan Robert Lange

                                  Beautiful, just beautiful. Seriously, I love the ending line: “Comforting a lifetime of internal cries.” Well done!

                                  • Santita

                                    Thank you, Tristan!!



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