Building, breaking, misbehaving
Close my eyes your gone
Love was hopeless
Love was cruel
But you my love
Were strong
Lying, crying, inside I’m dying
Fight for my last breath
Love was folding
Uncontrolling
But you my love
Were death
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Author:
T.C. (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: November 17th, 2018 16:13
- Category: Love
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Comments1
Clark, I love the word play and the sentiment you've penned in these lines. The sad imagery expresses your emotions well.
Do an edit and drop the "e." Should be breath.
Thanks for sharing this wonderful read. 🙂
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