Joe Dawson



Going purely off the data,

The best spaceships are round,

Look up at night to find that's right,

There are millions to be found.


And here we are on one of them,

A precious plot we lease,

A home to have our children on,

And fight our wars in peace.


© Joseph G Dawson


  • Fay Slimm

    Clever piece Joe - very telling that final line. Yes I agree the best space ship to be one is here where we live and the rest are found every night if we look up and if sky is cloudless we can clearly see their roundness. Great read.

    • Joe Dawson

      Thank you Fay, I should say that a week ago today Friday 30/11/208 my BT Hub 5 blew up and it has taken BT precisely eight days to send me a new one and thus here I am. Many thanks again for your comment. Joe

      • Fay Slimm

        Glad to see you back again Joe - what a palaver when computers go wrong and all engineers seem busy as bees - I relate to this clearly my friend.

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