Bitten by the snake in the fragility of youth
Twisting in agony, the instability of truth
Immense toxic pain started shooting up through
Spinal chord travelling its final journey up to
My brain, my mind, where the venom still manifests
Remaining under-surface, unnoticed and unaddressed
Circulating, perforating, percolating inside of me
Forming the persona of the person it would make of me
Mortal resistance of the venom’s lethality
Innate anti-poison that saved me physically
But the damage laid waste to my fragile mentality
Seeped through the recesses of my fragile psychology
Too young to realise, too young to repair
18 years imprisoned in the Cobra’s lair
Like prey tangled up in the snake’s twisted snare
No fight, nor flight to save on the wing of a prayer
Too young to fight fire or light the fuse
Too young to sight higher or sight the abuse
The abuse transformed after those 18 years
It turned itself inward with the hating and the fears
I sawed through my ankle to find release from the snare
And scrambled on knees to flee the serpent’s lair
With a keen sense of smell the Cobra followed my scent
As I crawled into adulthood from an adolescent
Years and years spent trying to fix and amend
For the damage done to me from the serpent’s venom
Somehow thinking it was all through self-affliction
Learnt new ways of survival, new wounds needing stitching
Self harm coming in the form of narcotic addiction
The abuse done to me transgressed, self infliction
First turning to speed, weed, LSD trying to fit in
But I found heaven in heroin, cue the instant itching
For more and more honey till it all had sunk in
To my body, to my mind, till my soul was rich in
The contents of the Holy Grail, the Chalice Jesus had drank from
Soon to be the Devil’s blood leading me to dance to the Devil’s song
Seemingly never ending vessel that levitated me above the lows
A path through the clouds, free of pain, free of woes
Opiate kingdom, my heavenly, humble abode
A familiar place to which I’d travel, down that same old road
Addiction kept unnoticed as I’d struggle withdrawal
In my 9 to 5, when my office job fed opiate survival
In the real world see where I still felt liable
To my family, to myself always praying for revival
And so it continued as I write these very words
A new form of therapy to dispel the Cobra’s curse
Always looking for ways to avoid following the opiate herds
On that inevitable path of sorrow into the funeral hearse
Realisation has led me to realise the bite can’t be unbitten
Idealisation has led me to idealise that you can not be smitten
All through your life thinking you will always fit in
With the ideals of others realising that quitting
Is the cowards way out and it’s not quite fitting
With my way of life, these words that I’ve been spitting
See I can’t change the past, the fact that I’ve been bitten
But I can change my stance, till I’m no longer riddled
With this venom, this poison, that resides inside of me
Creates this music, demonic fiddle, that often takes hold of me
I learn the guitar, sound record, to keep voices at bay
I write these words, forged deep, from the thoughts I need to say
To my mind, inside, where the venom resides
An attempt to change direction of the winds and the tides
So hear me when I say that I forgive that instinctual snake
For all the carnage, constant leaves that I have had to rake
For all the self harming, my personality that I have had to forsake
For all the soundless alarms, the relationships that I had to break
For all the charming aspects of my personality left in the wake
Of the destructive force of the path I was forced/chose to take
I still see the positives, the fact that I am no fake
For without this journey, I wouldn’t be able to write, nor create
A purer mind, free of resentment, free of all this hate
Will the real Phil Briggs stand up, it’s now your turn to take
Now that this poem is ending, all that remains to say
Things are looking brighter Phil, focus, stay on top of your game
Turn your back on the past, all that pain, all that shame
- Author: Bill Friggs (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: November 25th, 2018 13:42
- Comment from author about the poem: This poem is the latest I’ve written and it comes at a time where I feel I’m at a crossroads in my life where I’ve decided to put my past in the past and let go of hate, blame and resentment. It’s a reflection of my life to date, citing the abuse I suffered from an early teenager and the problems that followed me into the years beyond. \r\n\r\nIt’s very personal and honest, as such it provides much needed therapy for myself. Adding the poem to this site I hope will give me the platform to further help myself progress mentally as well as hopefully share my art to a larger audience. I hope you find it an interesting read and feel free to send any comments. Thanks for taking the time to read this. Phil
- Category: Forgiveness
- Views: 22
Comments2
The outing of deep core results of former abuse can only be helpful to healing and your wise decision to turn your back on the venom of past happenings and in brighter tomorrows "stay on top" and enjoy life is surely a positive move Phil - -
- -this write is a credit to your determined courage and will doubtless help others along the same way - - warm wishes for success in your choice to "let go of hate, blame and resentment" all of which are toxic to health A compelling read which goes into my favourites and thank you for sharing here with us.
Hi Fay,
Thank you so much for your kind words and thoughts on what is the very first poem I’ve published. You’re right in saying that writing and poetry is a great format for outing angst and inner/subconscious thoughts.
Soon enough I’d like to start writing more about the beauty I see in life, nature for example. It’s a beautiful, fresh, sunny Autumn day today and I can already feel that sunshine penetrate my soul and inspire me to write a more positive piece.
Thanks again for your comment and I look forward to reading the work of others.
Phil
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