Take Me Away


She said, “Take me away, 

Take me to a better place.

Take me away,

Take me to some better things.

Take me to the moon,

Take me to the stars, 

Take me anywhere as long as it’s far.”


I’ll go anywhere you want to go,

As long as it’s far from home. 

I’m drowning in this space,

Drowning in the MilkyWay.


Take me to a black hole.

Somewhere no one else knows.

We’ll fade away,

And you’ll take me to another place. 



  • Author: MissileOfUncertainty (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 2nd, 2018 12:18
  • Category: Surrealist
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  • User favorite of this poem: Echo Seeker.


  • Neville

    a most original little gem in my humble opinion, certainly very much enjoyed.. but almost impossible to read between the lines..... I bet you like Dali... I do.... All Good Things, N

  • Echo Seeker

    I loved it. You truly have a gift for poetry.

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