i could do every impressive thing in the world & you still wouldn't love me. wear the most flattering dress & paint my face in seductive colors & you still wouldn't love me. write you a thousand poems & recite them in five different languages & you still wouldn't love me. climb the highest mountain to the very top & confess my love to you & you still wouldn't love me. rip my heart right out of my chest for you & you still wouldn't love me. if both of us were dying & i offered you my last breath just so you could keep breathing you still. wouldn't. love me.
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It can't be that bad, surely.. so much self directed negativity ain't good for thee.. I liked these words tho ..
this poem isn't real it was something i made up. but i did write it in the perpective that i would probably have if someone didn't love me back. thank you for reading it i'm glad you like it.
good to hear, one never can tell..
I love this. Feelings that I am way too familiar with. Very well written, direct and beautiful. Great job.
thank you so much.
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