im sorry

lainacarson98



im sorry its not him and its you that i want to highlight my feelings id speak in a different font im sorry its not me and its her that you want my heart cries who knew true love could haunt i see through you you see through me i forgive you way to easily ill always be there for you, care for you but she always wins she wants you too

  • Author: lainacarson98 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 8th, 2018 03:14
  • Comment from author about the poem: I fell in love with a guy who went back to his ex. he keeps coming back to me.
  • Category: Love
  • Views: 52
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  • dusk arising

    I really like the way you've chosen to write about this painful part of your life.
    In particular your minimalist choice in punctuation accentuates what a mixed up messy relationship these things are where one thing flows seamlessly into interfering with other parts of our lives.
    Stepping outside a critique of your writing - you know you have to move your life on from this 'no win' situation unless you are prepared to accept that you are only worth part-time attention from an imperfect lover.

    • lainacarson98

      thank you for your time to put in your honest advice, I really do appreciate it.



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