im sorry its not him and its you that i want to highlight my feelings id speak in a different font im sorry its not me and its her that you want my heart cries who knew true love could haunt i see through you you see through me i forgive you way to easily ill always be there for you, care for you but she always wins she wants you too
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lainacarson98 (
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- Comment from author about the poem: I fell in love with a guy who went back to his ex. he keeps coming back to me.
- Category: Love
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I really like the way you've chosen to write about this painful part of your life.
In particular your minimalist choice in punctuation accentuates what a mixed up messy relationship these things are where one thing flows seamlessly into interfering with other parts of our lives.
Stepping outside a critique of your writing - you know you have to move your life on from this 'no win' situation unless you are prepared to accept that you are only worth part-time attention from an imperfect lover.
thank you for your time to put in your honest advice, I really do appreciate it.
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