I want to die
but you'll suffer
i want to die
but you'll cry
so instead i cut...
i want to die
but you say you need me
i want to believe you...
but i want to die
my mind is running in circles
i try to protect you
in the process i put myself in the fire
but i don't mind it cause i want to die
1. Bleed out
OR
2. Overdose
doesn't matter as long as im DEAD.
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Author:
Bloody Pen (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 12th, 2018 16:32
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Very nicely written poem, at times people do feel life would be severely easier if they didn't exist or if they gave up on something. Its just that we are taught since birth that we must never give up or we must strive for the best. When in reality failure is the best since we learn from those things. We as people should be okay with failing and learn we don't need the best to feel alright. Although i do hope you feel better but keep writing good like this.
thank you and i hope i get better too but just enough for the people around me to not be scared for my life.
Baby steps indeed
yes, very little baby steps : |)
As long as those steps go forward that's all that matters
yes
writing is the best outlet for those of us struggling with these things, don't ya think ? sorry I'm awkward. this is beautifully blunt, honest, and raw. keep writing
Yes it is definitely is an outlet, the best one besides singing if you ask me.
And don't worry i'm awkward too, also thank you for the compliment on this piece : )
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