there once was a smile
i wore it proudly
a badge of honor only few have to earn
there once was normal
it came and went
again
leaving me out of place
again
this face can be deceiving
the smile i once wore, the hope i once had
i've lost it
again
something false is here now
again again again
-Elizabeth M.
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Author:
elizabeth milberger (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: December 12th, 2018 22:07
- Comment from author about the poem: I understand my poetry is not the best, but it is an outlet for my personal struggles with depression. constructive criticism welcome :)
- Category: Sad
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Comments1
WELCOME ELIMIL ~ Thanks you for your first POEM ! It is elegantly penned but also very poignant and straight form your heart. We all have THINGS which recur on our lives and your repetition of AGAIN (X 6) reinforces this ! You will find MPS is a very empathetic site~ in which we share ~ read & comment on each others poems. You can also build up a COHORT of MPS Friends.
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