The devil in disguise

Angela1711

First night, first sight 

First kiss total bliss 

So intense this feeling

Surrounded by some love lust mist 

 

She lured me in to a world full of sin 

Suddenly she became an addiction 

She new she had me hooked 

She was the pill I took on daily basis 

How was I to know she had two different faces 

 

At the start I thought it was love 

Thought she been sent by the lord up above 

When really she was sent to break me 

To take myself worth away 

To lead me astray 

 

Then all of sudden she is in complete control 

No trace of me being left behind

Turned into someone i do not recognise 

She was surely the devil in disguise 

  • Author: Angela1711 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 16th, 2018 08:15
  • Category: Unclassified
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  • Laura🌻

    Angela1711,

    An excellent write!
    Most of us can easily be snared into a situation so aptly penned by you!
    It’s painful...even to remember...once out of it!
    Thank you for sharing this poignant glimpse of an unfortunate situation!

    ~Laura~

  • LIGHT WARRIOR

    Aren't they ALL, ONCE EVERYTHING IS SAID AND DONE.?What I believe it is is NOT THE PERSON THEMSELVES..when two people are in fleeting love, they are extremely vulnerable to outside influences..especially when all they can see is each other...but when others who notice this start feeling left out or what have you, it releases a darkness from within them ...then it grows as more and more become aware of your bliss..so, then there is this black cloud created by human envy, jealousy, sometimes just down right evil that takes over one of them or BOTH OF THEM AND THEY ARE HURT AND SO, THAT IS THAT...be very wary of your surroundings when love comes to you next time..I would be willing to bet that your ex lover was influenced by something outside of herself to end up treating you the way that she did...anyway, very nice writing ...enjoyed

  • Angela1711

    Thank you for the reply. Yes i agree sometimes people around us influence how we behave

  • vanabba3

    I couldn't resist the title... Wow! very personable, well written and heartfelt. Nice work!

    • Angela1711

      Thank you. I read your work the other day. It definitely was very griping and made me want to read more. Impressed. I hope you have a good day x



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