Rejected
No longer something to admire
No longer what ignites your fire
Its affected me deeply
The way you have treated me
I now hold invisible scars that cut so deep they make me weep
Its plain to see you are no longer attracted to me
Is it because my body does not suit the image you held in your head
Is it because my face now has one line too many
Or is it because im like a worn out penny
Lifted and once admired by many
But no longer any shine
No longer something someone will say is mine
Rejected
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Author:
Angela1711 (
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Comments1
I note you tend to write more when you are feeling sad or down... you have more than adequately emphasized your mixed emotions of doubt, confusion and sadness here... I hope the New Year brings more joy to you... N
I do tend to write when im sad it helps me. I do have a very happy life though and i am grateful for everything i have been given. Thank you neville and a happy new year to you x
good to hear in every respect.. and my pleasure entirely Angela1711 ... Yes Happy New Year x
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