No Longer Admired

Angela1711

Rejected 

 

No longer something to admire

No longer what ignites your fire 

 

Its affected me deeply 

The way you have treated me 

I now hold invisible scars that cut so deep they make me weep

 

Its plain to see you are no longer attracted to me

Is it because my body does not suit the image you held in your head 

 

Is it because my face now has one line too many 

Or is it because im like a worn out penny 

Lifted and once admired by many 

But no longer any shine 

No longer something someone will say is mine 

 

Rejected 

  • Author: Angela1711 (Offline Offline)
  • Published: December 29th, 2018 19:44
  • Category: Unclassified
  • Views: 16
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  • Neville

    I note you tend to write more when you are feeling sad or down... you have more than adequately emphasized your mixed emotions of doubt, confusion and sadness here... I hope the New Year brings more joy to you... N

    • Angela1711

      I do tend to write when im sad it helps me. I do have a very happy life though and i am grateful for everything i have been given. Thank you neville and a happy new year to you x

      • Neville

        good to hear in every respect.. and my pleasure entirely Angela1711 ... Yes Happy New Year x



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