Fire
Death
Decay
A falling angel,
Wings burning,
I sit and watch unfazed
And yet screaming on the inside,
I try to move --
Try to run and catch her
But still,
There is nothing I can do,
But watch,
The falling star.
Water
Life
Vigor
a flower,
sitting in a field,
alone and beautiful --
purple and hanging;
a flower to never be touched
a poison out to kill everything, what dares, to touch it
and still
we admire it --
wishing,
that we could be beautiful.
earth
cinnamon
passion
love,
it is a beautiful thing
something --
not to be tampered with.
the innocent girl,
blonde hair blowing in the wind,
a broken heart and a world ruined,
disowned by her family,
Prepared to end her life because nobody loved her.
kill yourself they said,
you don’t matter
and, without love,
she did,
a falling angel.
Air
Truth
cold and biting
I was there for her,
I tried to tell,
Just how much she meant to me --
But In the end
I couldn’t say it.
That she was my world --
my flower;
A poisoned flower --
One that I couldn’t touch.
And in the end, she jumped
With a horrid saying on her lips
Saying that the universe
Was her poison.
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Author:
Annabelle Schouviller (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: January 7th, 2019 16:21
- Category: Sad
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Comments2
WELCOME TO MPS AZAZEL ! Thanks for your first very intersting Poem. It is exceallent in its structure and subject ! Four balanced stanzas relating to the destruction of LIFE and LOVE ~ A Poisoned Universe indeaed ! As a Scientist ~ I like the way each stanza begins with one of the FOUR ANCIENT Elements ~ FIRE ~ WATER ~ EARTH & AIR. The latter three are the Terrestrial Spheres tht are under threat from man made Pollution ! In the way we will make the EARTH uninhabitable for Humans and there is NOWHERE ELSE to go ! Scientists are concerned but by 2100 (you will be 97 !) it will be much worse ! Im 35 so i will be 97 in 2080. You call yourself a LONELY SCIENTIST ~ but you are not alone and Applied Science & Technology can help to preserve Planet Earth for a little longer. We all need to be a little greener ! Your FRIEND ~ BRIAN (UK) Please check my site ~ Thanks. ANGELA is my Fiancee ~ at present working in NEW ZEALAND
this was brilliant 🙂 welcome, I am new too!
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