Everything now has color

Netashi

When a heart starts to beat

Theta was here he was also over there and everywhere, everything had color and smell it looked like he wasn’t living life until now. No matter what he was doing he felt alright.

  • Lungs filled to the brim without falter

Happiness is here sorrow is no longer

  • Charismatic yet still very timid

But for now life has no limits

  • No cage rope or line for joy and goals

I now know what I must do I now know my role

  • To live each day at a time with making the most of it

To be part of all their lives and love every bit of it

  • Exhaling to catch my breath and dealing with inconveniences

Because even the life has color black and gray are still acquaintances

  • But it’s worth it in the end for i have this happiness in life

It will be great remembering this before I die

  • Because I can gladly say the old me knows defeat

Everything now has color and I can hear my heart beat  

 

  • Author: Ernie (Pseudonym) (Offline Offline)
  • Published: January 10th, 2019 11:17
  • Comment from author about the poem: Salutations and good morning hope you have a wonderful day, as always feedback is welcome. - From your friendly scholar T (Someone once called me T and it sounded nice)
  • Category: Unclassified
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Comments5

  • Netashi

    Thank you Adam my dear dear friend.

  • orchidee

    A fine write, erm, T.

    • Netashi

      Thank you orchidee, also if the name seems strange you can just say theta although your reaction did give me a chuckle.

      • orchidee

        Ohh, I'll call ya what ya like - A,B,C,D,.... You can call me 'O' if ya want. Call me anything ya like - within reason. Erm, except Agatha - random name picked out there. lol..

        • Netashi

          Neat will do

        • Neville

          I think the title is fantastic.. and of course true...

          • Netashi

            Indeed Neville

          • Crystal Hope

            I really liked this piece. Very colorful indeed! 😀

            • Netashi

              Thank you for the kind words

            • Fay Slimm.

              Colour can be a saviour to sight that has seen only sad black and white - - a great piece of advice on finding happiness by living a day at a time.

              • Netashi

                Indeed well said Fay. And also thank you for the kind words



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