Claudelle DeLuna


Releasing toxic arrows,

aiming apparent targets,

focus forgetting peripheral,

vision into another’s world,

 apathy a delusional mindset,

burning fires in the nine hells,

grandiosity overrides odyssey,

irony doesn’t prove a master

skillful, it makes ignorance

a sugarcoated placebo, blissful

game of automatons in overdrive,

but without collisions, growth is

an effortless presumption of





 “A fool thinks himself to be wise, but a wise man knows himself to be a fool”

William Shakespeare




  • Diamond

    I feel the exchange of vibes with this writing. Bravo!

    • Claudelle DeLuna

      Thank you for reading & favoring the poem! Diamond
      I hope the dissertation team gets the vibes to when
      I get to present my final draft in December 2019.
      Much Appreciated!

    • sylviasearcher

      We learn by falling down, I always disliked something about the phrase. It somehow had a punitive negative sentiment. But we grow from our collisions. I adore that. That expresses it perfectly.

      • Claudelle DeLuna

        Thank you for stopping by reading & commenting! Sylvia
        Much Appreciated,

      • whisperingquill

        soul transference

        This is how this reads to me
        as when two collide and fragment shards from both are left in the other....this answers the question
        Everything and everyone is connected....
        excellent photo and mesmerizing video

        Thank you my friend for this. πŸ‘πŸΌπŸ˜Š

        • Claudelle DeLuna

          Thank you for stopping by reading and commenting! Vin
          I like your interpretation....a lot.....
          Abrazos y besos amistosos,

        • orchidee

          A fine write C.

        • Fay Slimm

          so many powerful phrases in this one Claudelle - - most certainly is "apathy a delusional mindset," so collisions are wake-up-calls we all at times need - thanks for another well expressed read my friend.

          • Claudelle DeLuna

            Thank you for stopping by reading and commenting! Fay
            Blessed day dear lady,

          • ANGELA & BRIAN

            Thats what haappens when two Worlds collide !
            Lif & Love is always on a collision course ! Sometimes we can dodge the arrows : and overide the differences ! We are all Placebos : we all go into ovrdrive : but (as you say) : without collisions there is no growty ! In my experience LOVE always skates on thin ice ! Love the mystical Picture and the Mesmerising Music :
            Abrazos y Bendiciones con Amor en El Spirito :
            Angela y Brian 🧑🧑🧑🧑

            • Claudelle DeLuna

              Thank you so much for visiting & for a nice comment! A&B
              Abrazos, Besos y Bendiciones para los dos!

            • Goldfinch60

              A wonderful message in this piece Claudelle - thank you.


              • Claudelle DeLuna

                Thank you for your nice comment! Andy
                Blessings Sir,

              • Quemis

                This is so fun.

                • Claudelle DeLuna

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