if you but take a bite of this forbidden fruit...

Gary Edward Geraci

what seems to me a

perennial temptation

i can be like God

-Gary Edward Geraci

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orchidee January 13th, 2019 03:25
A fine write Gary. We don't know if it was an apple. Many say it was!
- Gary Edward GeraciJanuary 13th, 2019 18:03
  From the tree of knowledge too...Many thanks Orchidee!
Neville January 13th, 2019 05:37
shh say it quietly, or the disciples shall hear....

tis a fact, I kinda liked this tho.... N
- Gary Edward GeraciJanuary 13th, 2019 18:06
  Thanks Neville; most precisely its the disciples whom need to remind themselves (or to be reminded by a brother or sister) of having large targets on their backs. The devil has always had his sights set.
- NevilleJanuary 13th, 2019 18:12
  despite the stark reminder... I still kinda like this tho..
- Gary Edward GeraciJanuary 13th, 2019 18:21
  I appreciate that Neville. Thank you.

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