Claudelle DeLuna

**Chasing him Crazy**

She chases him crazy in abandoned corners,

playing with the guitar’s strings left broken,

breathing him deeply, thinking him strongly,

begging for an omen to unlock a gun's fire,

he’ll comeback to be loved & disrobed,

he is miles away in the Town’s Square,

playing games,extracting a nectar,

don’t walk out with a song half played,

ever, ever, again it’s only fair,

sit on the couch,

say, what’s her name?




  • whisperingquill

    So damn reads like someone has got it bad.....just my interpretation vagalume...the music vid adds so much really defining....

    • Claudelle DeLuna

      Gracias por la visita y el comentario!
      Te lo agradezco mucho,
      Abrazos y Besos,

    • orchidee

      A fine write Claudelle.

    • Neville

      This is most probably the best one of your poems I have had the pleasure of reading so far...

      • Claudelle DeLuna

        Thank you for reading & for your lovely comment.....Neville
        Much Appreciated!

      • Fay Slimm.

        A agree with Neville- - this has to be one of your best - an exquisite gem of a read Claudelle.

        • Claudelle DeLuna

          Thank you, my dear lady!
          Much appreciated!

        • ANGELA & BRIAN

          GRACIAS BELISIMA HERMANA ! A me gusta el foto y el piano muy triste ! A me gusta tambien sua Poesia enigmatica ! She is in pursuit of a Man whose guitar strings are broken and alas whose song is unfinished ! Donde esta ? Este Hombre es en la Ciudad jugando jugares con Senoritas ! Que es Ella nombre ? Life is ever thus ! Thanks for sharing !
          Abrazos y Besos Tua Amiga en Poesia :
          ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก

          • Claudelle DeLuna

            Thank you for commenting! Angela
            Much appreciated,
            Abrazos, besos y bendiciones,

          • dusk arising

            Like tune playing with my imagination u take me thru pain and prick my personal insanity.
            I loved this piece.

            • Claudelle DeLuna

              Thank you so much for stopping by, reading, favoring
              & commenting! Dusk
              Much appreciated,

            • psychofemale

              Nice :) i really enjoyed this one

            • Goldfinch60

              What a wonderful poem Claudelle, so much emotion to my mind.

              • Claudelle DeLuna

                Thank you! Andy
                Much appreciated,

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