The Better Version of Us

The echos in my heart yearn for you love, to learn every detail, every fantasy, the inner being of your soul, to bask in your eyes and soak in your smile for that is when I feel most beautiful. 


This whirlwind in my lungs yearns for you love,  for every breath that I take is calmer, my soul rests on the tip of your tongue and the wonders your words create, for your language knows no bounds and the truth is fluently spilled.


The unsteadiness in my brain yearns for you love, because I have demons too, but you calmed the storms, took down the wall that blocked out the sun, and made my skin glow, a better version of me, let me help you create a better version of you.


  • Neville

    This is the first of your poems I have read thus far... twas most enjoyable and shall not be the last visit I make to your page.... thank you.. Neville

    • Denise

      Thank you very much, I am glad that you enjoyed it and hope you enjoy my other writings as time passes.

    • Fay Slimm.

      An emotional tug through each line of this tribute to love brought tears to my eyes Denise. A fine read.

      • Denise

        Thank you so much, I try my hardest to write what I feel even if I feel that it is junk, I end up with little bits and eventually it falls into place, I appreciate you taking the time to read.

      • Claudelle DeLuna

        love this poem...

        • Denise

          Thank you very much!

        • psychofemale


          • Denise

            Thank you!

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