And the days
The waves crash over
And her minds
Capsized once more
When she's stranded
In wild waters
I build her
A lighthouse
On the shore
And the times
The seas grow angry
And her hearts
Too tried to talk
When she's sinking
In wild waters
I build her
A lighthouse
On the shore
And the nights
The stars don't shine bright
And her eyes
Lie to her thoughts
When she's circling
In deep waters
I build her
a lighthouse
On the shore
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Author:
Edthepoet (
Offline) - Published: January 27th, 2019 06:47
- Category: Love
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Comments4
Ed... I REALLY LIke this
Great sense of warmth and compassion wonderful wordplay to paint a picture of thi stormy life/relationship BRAVO i look forward to more like this
Andrew
Thank you Andrew, I hope there's more like this to come as well. Haha.
Edthepoet,
An excellent write!
I agree with Mr. Forrest...
Thereās warmth, compassion, and love woven throughout your poem!
Very relatable!
Thank you for sharing!
~Laura~
Thank you Laura for your very kind words
Hmmm. The need for a lighthouse denotes dangerous waters.
Rocky outcrops where hearts have floundered.
Brings out the lifeboatman in your soul..... rescuing a lost soul.
One hopes there are happy days too.
Hey dusk, Happy days aplenty my friend, I just struggle to write about them as effectively as the ones that force me to write.. If you catch my drift.
Yes i do. Nothing is tugging st me at the moment hence i dont write a lot.
I know the feeling well, I don't seem to be writing as frequently as I used to... I find it best not to force it though, it will appear when it's ready..
One word.... Brillaint!
Much appreciated Rebecca
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