Claudelle DeLuna

**I Wanna Have You**


I wanna be the river that drenches your all,

The whirlpool sucking you whole,

Your sunrise and Your sunset,

I wanna be the pleasure you ever sought,

The mystical cascade in your veins,

Your beginnings and Your ends,

I wanna be the desire that consumes your flesh,

The love making with no end,

Your unlimited pass to my paradise,

I wanna bathe completely in your blood,

The final ace of all your gambles,

Your winning prize once and for all,

I wanna have you






  • Laura


    This is an amazing write!โค๏ธ
    Brava, poetessa!


    • Claudelle DeLuna

      Thank you for commenting & favoring the poem! Laura
      It is greatly appreciated....


      Gracias Cara Hermana Nuestra ~ A nos gustan La Guitarra Acoustica ~ especiallamente por La Musica de Los Pueblos ! Love the POEM too ! Es muy absorbando en su contento ~ desera TODO d'amor y vida y ultimatmente El SANGRE ~ WOW ! Thanks for sharing ! Muchos Abrazos y Besos de Tus Hermanos y Amigos Verdades
      BRIAN y ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก

      • Claudelle DeLuna

        Gracias! A&B
        much appreciated,
        Abrazos, besos y bendiciones,

      • orchidee

        Someone still having fun? I'm glad to hear it! lol.

        • Claudelle DeLuna

          Thank you! Orchidee

        • Goldfinch60

          Another fine sensual write Claudelle.

        • Fay Slimm

          Such passion accompanies this invitation to taste and see that love can be won if we scribe as your words do here so clearly Claudette.

          • Claudelle DeLuna

            Thank you for reading&commenting! Fay
            much appreciated,

          • Neville

            erotic to the very core... take a tiny bite and then ya gonna want some more....... N

            • Claudelle DeLuna

              Thank you for commenting my friend!
              what can I say love, lust & greed....LoL

              • Neville

                there are some things money just can not buy, but correspondingly, you just can't get enough of.... if you know what I mean..........

              • Omnimax47

                This poem simplifies a much needed love one person has, thank you for the very passionate poem.

                • Claudelle DeLuna

                  Thank you for stopping by reading & commenting!
                  much appreciated,

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