Claudelle DeLuna



~~ Speaks paradoxical to actions,

given in verbal and nonverbal lamentations,

of destructive behavior violations,

misconceptions, judgement, hatred,

the mind rape ~~



  • Neville

    wow now that's what I call toxic.... you just can't read this, without the words shouting inside ya head..... mind rape indeed.... N

    • Claudelle DeLuna

      Your comments are always appreciated my friend!
      Thank you so much for your time!
      Have a wonderful evening!

      • Neville

        you too.....

      • ANGELA & BRIAN

        GRACIAS CLAUDELLE NUESTRA AMIGA CARA ! Por Musica muy spooka ! y Una Poesia muy enigmatica ! Rape of ones BODY is violation of the SACRED ~ Rape of ones MIND is violation of the SPIRITUAL ! The Good Book dice ~ NO OS CONFORMEIA a este siglo ~ sino transformeos por medio de la renovacion de vuestro entendimiento ! We are all Guardians of our own Minds so we have to be careful ~ What we read ~ watch & listen to & Who we associate with & How we act ! AMEN !
        Abrazos y besos y Benediciones ~
        Tus Amigas Spirituales BRIAN y ANGELA ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก
        Por favor CHECK ~ Puente Sobre Aguas Turbulentes (Simon y Garfunkel)
        Tambien nuestra Nueva Fusion de VACACCIONES 2019 ~ Gracias B y A ๐Ÿงก๐Ÿงก

        • Claudelle DeLuna

          I love how you assessed this piece of poetry!!
          I totally agree to your comment....๐Ÿ‘
          Much appreciated my friends,๐Ÿ’–

        • Michael Edwards

          Some punch in this little gem.

        • orchidee

          A fine write Claudelle.

        • Fay Slimm

          Claudelle you have composed here a really powerful short stanza of words outlining the meaning of mind-rape. Toxic indeed to a chosen victim.

          • Claudelle DeLuna

            Thank you my friend for your time & comment!
            Greatly appreciated,

          • psychofemale

            very powerful words.

            • Claudelle DeLuna

              Thank you for visiting & commenting!

            • Goldfinch60

              Very powerful words Claudelle.

              • Claudelle DeLuna

                Thank you for visiting & commenting! Andy
                Have a wonderful night!

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