Burning, burning, escape the flame
and you’re ‘home safe’ to freedom’s prison
dragging you back again, luring you
from the fire. The thick smoke hangs, lingering,
a gloomy shadow over your head,
so you're in the dark alone, with no
companion but the very smoke that
drowned you. Fearing solitude, grasp and
hold onto it, as on it your life
depends. Out the crevice between the
floor and wall, the very smoke that killed
you, befriend. Open your bright eyes and
recognise me here, but all you see for
miles is a dead, barren wasteland, the
remnants of this daydream world. The smoke
seeps in, slipping under and around
until it's in you, contaminating
your skin; it lingers and won't let go.
It billows, engulfing this daydream world.
- Author: hannah (Pseudonym) ( Offline)
- Published: January 30th, 2019 12:10
- Comment from author about the poem: Based on an old poem that I wrote a while ago. Hope you enjoy!
- Category: Reflection
- Views: 12
- Users favorite of this poem: prettylittlepoet
Comments1
dark but yet beautiful
many emotions you captured in this one 🙂
thank you!
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