Claudelle DeLuna



It dances in the waves of past,

shipwrecked in the mist of forgotten coasts,

under the immensity of its origin,

the Adriatic, Mediterranean,

Black, Caspian, Persian, Arabian & Red seas,

the ancestors left their traces,

with foreign bloods to never be forgotten,

flowing under and above cyclically,

but always returning to its origin,

to become the end of the beginning,

where existence divinely submerges,

floating free of stupid prejudices,

created by blind conquerors,

who only understand the present





  • SerenWise

    Lovely piece!

    • Claudelle DeLuna

      Thank you so much for reading & commenting!


      Gracias CLAUDELLE Hermana Cara Mia ! Por un Photo elegante : Musica Incredibla y una Poesia Enigmatica !
      We are all the Product of our Past : which shapes US through History & Mystery to what we are today ! MY DNA (which makes me what I am !) is not just from my Parents but from their Parents and back & back to our First Anczestors thousands of years ago. I agree those who reject antiquity and only seek to understand the present : are of All Men : MOST BLIND !

      Abrazos y Besos : ANGELA 🧑🧑🧑🧑
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      • Claudelle DeLuna

        Thank you so much for visiting & commenting! Angela
        Abrazos y Besos πŸ˜ŠπŸ’–βœŒπŸŒΉ

      • Neville

        blind conquerors
        who only understand the present

        in an ideal world, mistakes of the past would determine the decisions of the present and serve to shape those of the future.. and my middle name would be Ocean.... N

        • Claudelle DeLuna

          Thank you so much for reading my work my friend!

          • Neville

            ............ N

          • Seek

            You encapsulate history's repetition and human folly in a fine poem, Claudelle. So liberating reading this.

            • Claudelle DeLuna

              Thank you so much for your nice comment SeekπŸ˜ŠπŸ’–βœŒ

            • Goldfinch60

              Wonderful poem and those last two lines are so meaningful and true.

              • Claudelle DeLuna

                Thank you so much for you nice comment AndyπŸ˜ŠπŸ’–βœŒ

              • orchidee

                A good write Claudelle.

                • Claudelle DeLuna

                  Thank you so much Orchidee πŸ˜ŠπŸ’–βœŒ

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