A shattered man; staring at his own reflection
He recounts; past mistakes to himself, aloud
It leaves him feeling defeated; not proud
He starts to weep; a mournful lullaby
Falling to his knees
Mumbling, “Lord, please forgive me.”


  • whisperingquill

    Damn....excruciatingly relatable. Marvelous introspective piece. Thank you 🌟

  • Claudelle DeLuna

    Great poem! Lauren
    liked the song too!

  • Goldfinch60

    Good write, forgiveness is always there for us all.

  • Neville

    I feel for that man, every single broken shard of him...

    a poignant plea indeed Lauren and certainly poemed to near perfection.... I am just another fan, N

  • Scrambled Letters

    A humbling experience...goes great with the song. Exquisite ❤

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