Coin Flip
Theta was here, on a hill about to leave school was he dropping out or was he graduating, didn’t matter the world was still spinning and he was alright with that.
- Each breeze seems spastic but sharp as if it was hurried
The leafs fall neatly in a unproportionate pattern my vision still blurry
- My glasses felt slant but comfortable to an extent not like a pillow
The flowers blooming some are growing and others gracefully willow
- Noise of cars and bicycles fill the air like orchestrated noise
Its music for some but for others it holds no such poise
- Clouds in the sky crawling to their destination with no emotion
While destiny sits on the ground setting people’s life in motion
- She loves everyone but the boy in the distance staring at her
It seems she accidently forgotten about him and alone life he must learn
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Author:
Ernie (Pseudonym) (
Offline) - Published: February 12th, 2019 11:26
- Comment from author about the poem: Morning my fellow poets i hope you all have wonderful days, as always feedback and suggestions are welcomed. - T the scholar
- Category: Nature
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Comments4
Does anyone know which book i referenced
Some adeptly crafted imagery in these engaging lines Theta - - a telling tale about youthful happenings and the changes love takes at the drop of a hat ...........I applaud that final well-rhymed couplet.
Thank you very much for the generous words
I like it, but as a piece I feel like it needs to be expanded on.
It felt short to me as well glad someone else felt that way too
I enjoyed the personal connection that you displayed through this piece! Good work
lr
Thank you for the kind words and input
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